Just a minor nit with the new book...
Before they reached the fork in the trail, a young woman near the
still, staring ahead. She pointed with her chin, not wanting to move.
“Look! Over there!” she said in a hissing whisper of fear. “Lions!”
BUT, I'm not interested in editing the whole book. I just want to enjoy it! I hope you can too by turning the writer/editor off . I know it's hard.
Time to be a, reader not a writer.
And this quote sums up how I felt when I read the five previous books in the Earth Children's Series: They may forget what you said, but they will never forget how you made them feel."
~ Carl. W. Buechner